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Hello everyone!

Here is the thing. So I wanted at first to create Robot class, I want him to move around some board. Maybe 10x10 or something like that, then i wanted to invent a Robot fights class, I want to add class players (becuase i want to play between player 1 and player 2) but here it is what I have so much.

Lets focus on this code because I want it to make it much better then start to create robot fights!

class Robot: def __init__(self, name, place, start = (0,0), power = 9): self.name = name self.start = start self.place = place self.power = power def get_name(self): return self.name def get_start(self): return self.start def get_place(self): return self.place def get_power(self): return self.power def set_name(self, x): if isinstance(x, str): self.name = x else: raise TypeError("must be a string") def set_start(self, x): if isinstance(x, tuple): self.start = x else: raise TypeError("must be a tuple") def set_place(self, x): if isinstance(x, list): self.place = x else: raise TypeError("must be a list") def set_power(self, x): if isinstance(x, int): self.power = x else: raise TypeError("must a int") def check_power(self): if self.power <= 0: raise ValueError("No power") def left(self, value): self.check_power() self.power -= value if self.place[0] - value < 0: self.place[0] = self.place[0] - value + 8 else: self.place[0] = self.place[0] - value def up(self, value): self.check_power() self.power -= value if self.place[1] + value > 7: self.place[1] = self.place[1] + value - 8 else: self.place[1] = self.place[1] + value if self.place[1] == 5: self.power += 2 def __str__(self): return self.name, self.place, self.power 

Also want I want to make better in this one. Well power will be important in the Robot fights, because if some robot from player 1 will be near to robot from player 2 I want them to you know, fight, so the power will be pretty good right there, if they will be near to each other the power will decrease until the robot is destroyed. But lets focus on above code to make it better.

Any tips how to make this SHORTER and more neat, closer to a advanced or just better solution will be definitely on point.

Have a great day!

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    Type annotations

    Using type annotations will make your program a lot more readable and easier to debug. For example:

    def __init__(self, name, place, start = (0,0), power = 9): # assignments 

    becomes

    def __init__(self, name: str, place : List[int], start: Tuple[int, int] = (0,0), power: int = 9): # assignments 

    I imported List, Tuple from the typing module from the standard library:

    from typing import List, Tuple 

    Here's some further information on using type annotations.


    Getter and Setter

    Using getters and setters is rather unpythonic. You can instead modify the getting and setting behaviours by using the @property decorator like this:

    def __init__(self, name: str, place : List[int], start: Tuple[int, int] = (0,0), power: int = 9): self._name = name # further assignments @property def name(self): return self._name @name.setter def name(self, value): if isinstance(value, str): self._name = value else: raise TypeError("must be a string") 

    This will allow you to use the properties without explicitly calling getter and setter methods:

    my_robot.name = 'foo' print(my_robot.name) 

    This question on StackOverflow contains some more detailed explanations.


    Logic

    1. You should also take a look at your setters for place and start. You only check the type of the passed argument value, but do not verify if the elements in the list or tuple are of type int.
    2. You could consider using a custom class Position or similiar for handling the positional logic of the robot. That way you can access the different dimensions by their names instead of indices of place (self.place[0] or self.place[1]). You'll also be able to put further logic (like clipping, etc.) into it.
    3. power and check_power(): Depending on your intended functionality you might want to limit the number of steps that can be taken by a robot to the power that it has left. As it is now, a robot can take any number of steps as long as it has power > 0 left.
    4. You should check the functionality left(value) and up(value) for big values, especially values that are > 2 * board_dimension. I suspect the results might be unintended.
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    • \$\begingroup\$Overall agreed. I would take your "unpythonic accessor functions" further - if there is any kind of non-trivial logic to the get or set, @property is called for, but here it isn't. Just make a "public" variable.\$\endgroup\$CommentedMay 12, 2021 at 15:15
    • \$\begingroup\$Genuine question: How do you then verify / ensure that only values of a certain type are assigned to public attributes, if at all?\$\endgroup\$CommentedMay 12, 2021 at 15:31
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      \$\begingroup\$The short answer is that you don't. Type verification - typically - is not done at all, since Python uses duck typing. Recent support for static analysis of types is helpful but doesn't apply in runtime. If you do want to apply validation to a value before set, then you would do it as you've shown with @properties or - if you're able to make the class immutable, which has a lot of advantages - then during __init__.\$\endgroup\$CommentedMay 12, 2021 at 15:55

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